Thank you! I admit, one of my reasons for using Liz was so she could get some TARDIStravel :o) And when it's all one word like that, it kinda looks like some sort of travel agent company name... :oD
The flashbacks began as just that - flashbacks. Exposition in disguise :o) But then it turned into two stories being told at the same time, and it seems to work :o) Glad you like the ending - I was a bit unsure about it at first, but then it turned out that writing the whole story in a very strange order had messed with my perception of it, so I had to try and read it as though I hadn't written it (which is very difficult).
Anyway, thanks for finding time among all that organisation and prioritising to let me know what you thought :o)
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Date: 2007-07-13 09:08 pm (UTC)The flashbacks began as just that - flashbacks. Exposition in disguise :o) But then it turned into two stories being told at the same time, and it seems to work :o)
Glad you like the ending - I was a bit unsure about it at first, but then it turned out that writing the whole story in a very strange order had messed with my perception of it, so I had to try and read it as though I hadn't written it (which is very difficult).
Anyway, thanks for finding time among all that organisation and prioritising to let me know what you thought :o)